The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The age-old question of man versus machine, we humans have always pondered on this topic forever, and with new advancements in Artificial Intelligence (AI) this topic has become more relevant than ever. People have argued for both sides. Some say machines are superior and like the issue presented some say human minds are superior after all humans are the ones who created the machines. I beg to differ; I believe that machines will not remain inferior --which is the case now-- to humans forever and there will come a time when machines will far exceed human capability in every way possible. I will explain my position in three paragraphs below. Yes, I have to acknowledge the fact that at this moment in current time, human beings are superior to machines. We are the creators of machines; a machine is only as capable as the human who uses it and even with the recent advances in AI there is still a lot to be desired. Humans are far better in creativity, and reasoning, and humans have the ultimate ability to think and create new things which the machines of today lack. But it is this advantage or superiority we possess against the machines today that will ultimately be the reason for it to not stay this way forever. I believe that this ability to create, think, and innovate will allow us humans to create something that will ultimately exceed us. Machines of today are already very good at doing certain tasks better than humans. This advantage they possess already makes them superior to humans at that particular task. For example, computers can calculate complex equations and calculations astronomically faster than humans. How can we say we are superior when machines are winning in certain tasks? And due to innovation, new machines are created which seem like every month they are better than humans at a certain task. We are continuously losing ground on what we’re better at everyday to machines and it will soon come a time when we are no longer able to say we are superior to machines. Even if we consider the ability to think as the ultimate ability that is the determinant of superiority. Machines of today are not just created by one person, not even one country. The technology of today such as the internet and platforms like GitHub has allowed human beings to collaborate on a scale never imagined before. The development of today’s machines is backed by the culmination of all brilliant human minds of the whole world. Research is being done at an unprecedented rate in AI and machines. It is only a matter of time before researchers can create AI that has the ability to think for themselves and create and innovate like us humans. This ability of machines will only be enchanted by the fact that machines are not limited by the biological limitations of the human and human mind. Machines have more longevity they can keep learning and innovating forever they are not fatigued. These advantages will inevitably lead machines to be superior to humans in the future. To conclude, it is very clear that this is a complicated topic and good arguments can be made by both sides. While it is the case that human beings are superior to machines today. New machines that are better than humans are specific tasks that are created frequently. Ultimately because of the human’s ability to think, innovate, and collaborate humans will eventually create a machine that can think like humans but with the lack of biological limitations of humans. This is why I believe that machines will not remain inferior to humans forever.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1896, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...y losing ground on what we’re better at everyday to machines and it will soon come a tim...
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Line 1, column 3106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...od arguments can be made by both sides. While it is the case that human beings are su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while, after all, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2940.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 611.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81178396072 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97176167858 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60471533749 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.39116202946 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 986.4 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0715201563 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3666666667 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.2758426966 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299174980349 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100532310422 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680787509878 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299174980349 0.150359130593 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.