Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem.
It is true that increasingly number of youngers have committed offenses in big cities across the world. While this phenomenon can be attributed to numerous reasons, some measures could be taken to deal with it.
On the one hand, youngers in major cities who are envolved in committing crimes more than before results from two main reasons. To commence with, the main motivation makes them do illegal activities is the poverty or financial instability. Huge influx of people moving from countrysides to cities, with hope of changing their life by more job opportunities, make the job maket become extremely competitive. Consequently, the unemployment rate also increases resulting to many youngers do not have jobs as well as unable to earn money, so that the solely escape from this situation is resort to crimes, stealing for example. Moreover, pressure from peers or family is also a reason make them become offensers. The feeling of isolation or unrecognization from friends and family can influence young people to seek belonging and support from negative peers groups, or turn to crime as a way to cope with circumstances.
There are solutions, however, to tackle this problems and bring young crimers back to the societies. Initially, government should secure adequacy of jobs for youngers, especially in economical disadvantagous areas. They can organize some vocational trainings or internship programs to enhance the rate of employment. The more unemployment rate reduces, the more criminal activities can be mitigated. In addition, there should be more establishment of youth-support services. This organization can offer mentorship, give advices and encourage young people to overcome emotional or psychological issues.
In conclusion, there are two main reasons, poverty and stress, can contribute to the trend that young people are committed crimes is increasing in major cities. However, there this negative trend can be reduced with particular solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46885245902 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04580458297 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2203575749 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207093208938 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671502360201 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749868460253 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137038506599 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412599033967 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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