Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem.
It is true that the number of youngsters who commit crimes around the world is rising, especially in urban areas. While the root of this tendency could be lack of education among the underprivileged, governments could take several steps to tackle this problem.
To begin with, the ones from the lower social-economic level might be prevented from a decent education. That is because their families are uncapable of paying for their tuition fees, as well as unable to purchase uniforms or books for their study. Vietnamese students in rural sites, for instance, often only finish grade 9 before joining the workforce, and their jobs usually require physical strength rather than intelligence, which lazy ones would avoid and resort to short-cut to earn a living. Young generations lack of academic knowledge as a result would create a low-quality workforce, combined with higher crime grade, would have an adverse bearing on the economy of the world.
However, governments bodies could take measures to solve the mentioned problem. The first one could be allocating resources to provide scholarships for youngsters from poor areas. This would give them incentives to attend classes that equip them with useful knowledge, which then enhance the quality of the future workforce. Another solution is funding social projects that hold cost-free classes. If children are offer free lessons, they will have more motivations to study without worrying about the financial burden on their families.
In conclusion, while lack of education could lead to a higher rate of crimes among young people, national and local authorities could solve this problem by funding educational projects and providing scholarships for underprivilege children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42962962963 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79337841385 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0106050382 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130319348674 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469877187097 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527299311319 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094381293435 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515973846185 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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