Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people insist on this view that they don't need to change the bad or unhappy situation and have to goes with it, but other people has opposite idea, they try to make change in their bad job situation and salary. In this essay will discusses both view by some reasons.
In one side, we have people who accepts current opportunity and don't try to change it. In most cases, this type of persons has specific features in behavior for example they do not have any self-confidence in deep down. They didn't try to change because their rule’s minds is have not ability for changing. So although they know if they don't make change in current situations, they should spend by this state, they scare to change because they thinks by changing maybe lost current position too, so they don't try at all. In this person we cannot see any specific change or suitable life style, all time of day they have to work to make routine life not wonderful one.
In other side, we have clever people who rich to this believe that trying for changing is not bad at all, they have this view if their position isn't enough good, by making a little or a bit changes can bring big different in it. In this type of group, we can see peoples who have feel self-confidence and self-assurance in deep down, they are strong in their need and never give up. They knows they are perfect so bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money are not suitable for themes ability and forced himself to do actions for making better life. In most cases we can see some poor people by strong work in better position are rich to the high level stage.
In fact, I agree with second view, because I know if I not satisfy from my own position in life, by trying to make it better, not only don't make my situation worse, but also absolutely it will become better. It is better for us and our children to learn bad atmosphere isn't stable, we should find strong power for removing it.
In conclusion, I can say just one sentence, big people in all periods are trying to make their own life instead of standing other person make it for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: discuss
...ituation and salary. In this essay will discusses both view by some reasons. In one side...
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...ple who accepts current opportunity and dont try to change it. In most cases, this t...
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... opportunity and dont try to change it. In most cases, this type of persons has sp...
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...to change because their rule’s minds is have not ability for changing. So although t...
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...changing. So although they know if they dont make change in current situations, they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41794871795 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27776174206 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464102564103 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8645265113 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.071428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195462565343 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837458359841 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073182813389 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138560092732 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843811636785 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.