Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, with the thriving growth of modern technology, there is no denying that genetic modification plays a crucial role in human lives, but it is also a controversial topic that often divides opinions. While many people believe that this area of technology has the potential to improve people's quality of life in some areas, others dispute and claim that it poses risks. In my opinion, I firmly believe that the advantages of genetic engineering will exceed the disadvantages; the following article will examine both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, there are a number of apparent benefits that genetic engineering has brought concerning, primarily in the areas of food production and medical advancements. It is obvious that genetic technology considerably boosts yields from agriculture in terms of the food-producing manufacturing industry. Additionally, it partially addresses famine and lessens poverty in developing countries as a result of the abundant food supply. Another aspect to consider is the medical perspective, which has shown astounding success in curing severe disorders and even having cosmetic effects. As an illustration, consider the fact that until the development of COVID-19 vaccinations by scientists a few years ago, the rate of human mortality showed signs of decreasing all over the world. By employing hormone and filler supplements, human longevity is increased and made more resistant to the effects of natural ageing.
Genetic engineering, however, has the potential to backfire and have unanticipated effects on flora and fauna. Because genetic technology partially disturbs the natural laws of life, the growth of genetically modified species may result in a loss of biodiversity in the area of ecosystem balance. As an example, growing certain varieties of maize will release poisonous chemicals that develop disease resistance, and consuming these plants will infect natural predators like insects. Therefore, this action coincides with the extinction of several birds that eat such insects. Another drawback of human cloning is that it is seen as unethical and that misuse is highly likely to occur. For instance, more than 277 attempts were made with the DOLLY sheep. For example, in case of DOLLY sheep, more than 277 attempts were produced before viable clone was produced. This only suggests that if human were to be cloned, scientists would need to conduct numerous “failed” attempts.
In conclusion, I am convinced that genetic engineering will have positive impacts on our lives, but once is it misused purposes, it will lead to unprecedented consequences.
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- Each year the crime rate increases What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity 89
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today Some people think that it will improve people s lives in many ways Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
- Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today Some people think that it will improve people s lives in many ways Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
- Topic Many criminals re offend after they have been punished Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43658536585 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9873628344 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59512195122 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1584703796 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165090103694 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425516221101 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565066547449 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101379876029 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635766973596 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 78.4519038076 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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