Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than
unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing
and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the
recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples
shape your position.
The global perception of a nation in the eyes of the international diaspora is often judged by the stability of the ruling government and its ability to make prudent decisions that benefit its citizens as well as the global community. Consequently, it is the responsibility of the government officials in charge to guarantee the welfare of its people, even if this sometimes warrants taking a stand against the public opinion. The prompt recommends that government officials should trust their own instincts in matters of public policy rather than blindly follow the will of its citizens. In my opinion, I mostly agree with this statement for two reasons.
It is common knowledge that a citizen has a better understanding of the pressing issues that exclusively concern her than the local government officials, simply because she is faced with these challenges on a fairly regular basis. It can also be attributed to a possible lack of empathy and a general lackadaisical attitude among these officials regarding the people's concerns. For instance, corruption is a major issue that is faced in many countries around the world, when government officials are often found guilty of siphoning large sums of taxpayer money for their personal benefits. This shows that the people in power are susceptible to abusing their authority for personal greed, and there needs to be a system of accountability to prevent such incidents.
However, it must be noted that the general public does not possess the broad and impartial perspective that is essential to make executive decisions, often at the risk of personal loss. Consider, for instance, a country where severe droughts have caused water shortages in some states. In this case, a decision by the national government to direct essential water supplies to affected states from the other states might be met with dissent from the people in states with no water shortages because their water supplies have been stymied. However, this trade-off makes sense from a broader perspective and can be judged as a prudent decision from an impartial perspective.
Moreover, public sentiment is often fickle and prone to short-term, impassioned outbursts, which might prevent rational decision making. For instance, strong public outroar regarding cases of racial or communal violence have often been followed by riot outbreaks, where the people decide to abandon faith in the authorities and take matters in their own hands. However, such incidents have only contributed to greater anarchy and loss of life and property, instead of "doing the right thing" as probably intended by the perpetrators. In this case, the government must take a strong stand against such harbingers of violence irrespective of sides, and strive to ensure the restoration of normal order. On a related note, if a suspect is alleged of some heinous crime and the public wants her dead, should the government listen to the will of the people or at least give the accused a fair hearing? In my opinion, the latter is the more pragmatic approach, even though the public might feel otherwise.
In a nutshell, even though public demands are extensive and everchanging and the government might not be able to cater to all of these issues with the desired effect, it still remains poised to make more prudent decisions from a global viewpoint, one that aims to equitably benefit all parties concerned. Perhaps, a sincere effort to increase the efficacy of communication of public feedback would help to keep the executive members in check, and ensure that they do not ignore the masses' welfare in matters of concern.
- In most professions and academic fields imagination is more important than knowledge Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and 68
- People s behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to address the most compelling reas 50
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student s field of study Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 66
- Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning f 50
- Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoni 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
.... However, it must be noted that the general public does not possess the broad and impartia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, at least, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3050.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 589.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17826825127 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92639038232 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80780859475 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500848896435 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 952.2 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5466245599 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.5 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.45 23.4991977007 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14104485995 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042849205694 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468348310423 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782438602542 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429785395621 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 160.0 100.480337079 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.