25. Public celebrations such as national days festivals etc are held in most countries. These are often quite expensive and some people say that government should spend money on more useful things. Do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary global landscape, national events hold a significant value and it certainly transcends any expense argument. Some people assert the viewpoint that these events are luxurious and government should invest the same amount in other essential domains for society betterment. I disagree with this school of thought as such celebrations are considerably important. This essay will discuss the stance in detail with valid arguments and references.
To begin with, proponents say that celebrating national days such independence day creates awareness among people. Vividly these events are source of information for the people to become aware of their ancestors struggle. For instance, India and Pakistan celebrates their independence days on 14th and 15th of August respectively. Families get together to recall the transition time and educate their children as to how their forefathers sacrificed to secure an independent land for themselves. This way families foster affiliation with the country among young and adolescents.
Similarly, these functions evidently showcase the cultural heritage influencing other countries. Additionally, such events contribute towards the tourism revenue which subsequently adds value to the economy. For example, globally people are tempted to attend the Chinese new year. Owing to its vibrant colorful festivities and enormous cultural activities, many people from around the world come to visit every year contributing substantially towards their tourism revenue.
To recapitulate the aforementioned, while these festive are expensive, they are indispensable to be celebrated. As it not only instills patriotism among young people and strengthen their association with their countries but also a good source of economic boost through tourism
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their independence days on 14th and 15th of August respectively. Families get tog...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, still, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91153846154 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06425034511 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665384615385 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6980627061 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.466666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171382422099 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559914329037 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443500780025 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970394380423 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320354029462 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.7 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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