Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, it is common for people to immigrate. However, due to the local language, living in other different countries can effect people life, such as social and practical. While speaking foreign language can bring some problems in daily life, I believe that this problems are very common and solved.
One reason is that it is familiar phenomenon in the immigrants. This is because when people move another countries, they need to talk with local people and adapt native culture. At the beginning, due to the words and customs, many people may have some social problems. However, with the time goes by, many people can learn local culture, which means that they can make friends with native speakers. And many native people are helpful and warmhearted, which means that local people will them if they suffer from the social problems. Therefore, the social problems can be solve in this process.
Another reason is that practical problems caused by the foreign language can be solved. As we all know, there are many countries have policy to help the immigrants to adapt quickly, such as Canada, the USA and so on. Governments publish many policies to help the foreigners find jobs and give them some financial aids, which can help them have confidence to overcome the challenges when they meet practical problems. Also, some communities have hometown associations. There are many people who come from the same country will help each other when they meet problems.
In conclusion, although it is true that living in other countries will cause social and practical problems, I firmly believe that it is general problems that everyone will meet, and they need to solve these problems with the help of local people and government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01724137931 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44443846911 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472413793103 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7490408487 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226441217895 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929242034454 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072963216169 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160827679971 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298022697906 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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