Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
I agree with the opinion that big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. First, in our current sociality (society), most of our need have to pay by money. Therefore, people study, rise their knowledge and possibility to work and earn money for accommodation, living costs. If we don't have enough money to pay for our basic need, not only our dream, our ambition but also our thinking way might be poor, shortsighted because of our situation. Second, we work for money, big salary can satisfy us by other way such as using money for our hobby, family, or anything we love. The lane between work and life will clear. Besides, if we reach for a job with high salary but not our passion, our career that we always dream of, it's too bad for us to do a bored career all life. We would feel tired, scared or exceed our energy, our ability to go to work. Last, i think it's perfect to reach for our dream job with a salary that be enough to pay for our need. But sometimes life doesn't like what we want, so reaching for a job with enough or high salary is much better than a dreamed job with low salary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29186602871 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23841640478 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6542162314 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158954838863 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942192356397 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159163517537 0.0667982634062 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158954838863 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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