Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food?
Nowaday, most people are not interested in how their food has been produced, even it is fresh or spoiled. They only care about the price of that food. Today I will prove to you the reality of that.
Firstly about realistic, Many students bought candy but they didn't know there were addicting substance in the candy, which would destroy their future. For example, on 30th October, the police determined that a type of candy containing drugs was being sold near the school. Beside, there are many types of drinks without clear source. These drinks have a lot of poisons which is the source of many diseases, like food poisoning, which lead to stomach pain.
Furthermore, people nowaday actually don't care about their food has been produced because money is one thing that is very at in their lives It's like, if your want to buy a sandwich and soda but you don't have enough money, day after day, you’ll die with the hungry stomach.
In the same way, the cheap or expensive pre price will directly influence people. They don't care whether their food are fresh of spoiled. Most people are captivated by foods costs. For instance, they will buy a lot of food without thinking if it's cheap, but they will consider whether they should buy or not for a long time if it's too expensive.
In conclusion, before buy some food, we should check the date, quality and origin to assure good health, especially children. If it's fresh, it will have a lot of nutrients that are very healthy, clean and safety. However, if it's spoiled, it will not different from poison, it will be the same as ingesting substance that causes diseases, When you eat spoiled meat, you will get many different diseases like sick, stomach ache, even cancer. Moreover, there are many places that put chemicals into the spoiled meat, making it look like fresh meat, and put the meat on sale. In other words, people are killing their own kind.
Overall most people in modern days realized that it's not just the food cost that they need to worry about. They also need to care about how their food has been processed because it will affect their health. I believe that price is not the main concern when people buy their food any more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...When you eat spoiled meat, you will get many different diseases like sick, stomach ache, even ...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ed because it will affect their health. I believe that price is not the main conc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67866323907 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13035948755 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537275064267 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3053749672 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.45 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377035542391 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128609292824 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122266996703 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233208175899 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158998765581 0.056905535591 279% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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