A recent study indicates that children living in the Himalayan mountain region in Nepal have lower levels of tooth decay than children living in suburban areas in the United States, despite the fact that people in the Himalayan mountain region in Nepal receive little to no professional dental care, while people in suburban areas in the United States see a dentist an average of 1.25 times per year. Thus, regular dental care is not helpful in preventing tooth decay.
The study mentions that regular dental care is not helpful in preventing tooth decay and it bases its claim on the basis of studying two region, one being Himalayan mountain region in Nepal and secondly the US.It states that people of Nepal have lower levels of tooth decay compared to the people of US , albeit they receive little to no professional dental care.
There are alternative explanations that could explain the conclusion.Firstly, the study considers two completely different regions that follow completely different food habits.Food habits have a very important role to play, as it is a known fact that too many chocolates or sweets leads to a tooth decay.So, considering that the lifestyle is different,we cannot turn away our eyes from the possibility of food causing tooth decay.If this holds true then, dental care can definitely reduce it but cannot prevent it from occurring until the cause is clearly looked into.This explanation is also bolstered by the fact presented in the study which points out that people in the suburban ares in US see a dentist on an average of 1.25 times per year.The same case doesn't hold for the people in Nepal who can manage even without professional dental care.
Another explanation could be the lack of awareness amongst the people of Nepal.One visits the doctor, when he/she knows that they suffering from a problem.People living in Nepal might not be aware that pain their tooth is not a minor issue and is the consequence of tooth decay.Taking into account that there is no professional dental care,most of them prefer to overlook the problem.As a result the data provided by the survey cannot be validated.
Thirdly, the study uses the frequents visits of people to dental care to support its claims that the children of US are more likely to suffer from tooth decay.But, on a closer observation we can also consider the possibility of the visits just being normal health care visits.It is not necessary that it must indicate a tooth decay.
So, a few explanations could undermine the conclusion easily by looking at the issue from a slightly different perspective.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26329787234 0.25644967241 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.156914893617 0.15541462614 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0797872340426 0.0836205057962 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0664893617021 0.0520304965353 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0372340425532 0.0272364105082 137% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.132978723404 0.125424944231 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0425531914894 0.0416121511921 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80876854121 2.79052419416 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212765957447 0.026700313972 80% => OK
Particles: 0.00531914893617 0.001811407834 294% => OK
Determiners: 0.114361702128 0.113004496875 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0292553191489 0.0255425247493 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132978723404 0.0127820249294 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2132.0 2731.13054187 78% => OK
No of words: 355.0 446.07635468 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00563380282 6.12365571057 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.57801047555 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352112676056 0.378187486979 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228169014085 0.287650121315 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177464788732 0.208842608468 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135211267606 0.135150697306 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80876854121 2.79052419416 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 207.018472906 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557746478873 0.469332199767 119% => OK
Word variations: 61.9488958755 52.1807786196 119% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.039408867 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 71.0 23.2022227129 306% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 237.660598333 57.7814097925 411% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 426.4 141.986410481 300% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.0 23.2022227129 306% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.6 0.724660767414 359% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 3.58251231527 558% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 93.8169014085 51.9672348444 181% => OK
Elegance: 1.68367346939 1.8405768891 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465952910568 0.441005458295 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.291998273202 0.135418324435 216% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108815317348 0.0829849096947 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.58762219726 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 4.38502959679e-16 0.147661913831 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.288228850124 0.193483328276 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11713479059 0.0970749176394 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.366783199404 0.42659136922 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.130002076672 0.0774707102158 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288228850124 0.312017818177 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11713479059 0.0698173142475 168% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.33743842365 36% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.87684729064 29% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 14.657635468 34% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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