Human activity is the only reason for potential extinction of animals.
On the planet earth there are uncountable lives living,including us,"The Brainy human beings". What differs us from all others is just a smallest part of our body,Brain.We,the humans have proved it by doing some intelligent and foolish activities.I would rather strongly state that we have tried to become selfish in many ways which include the degradation of the gifts given to us by the god.The issue here suggests that we havent taken care of or even thought of the living creatures other than us,and i firmly agree with issue stated.
What we have done is,just to be thinking or improving in a way from which we get benefits.if we just think about a minute or so about what we were,how we overcame,using what?the answer to the question might gives as glimpse of the issue."The animals", we have used them.Take it from the traspotaion purpose of the past or take it the current purpose liking food, luxuries and what not?
We can have a overlook to our daily life routine and a wise person who has all the knowledge about what he is using and what its made of will give us the shocking thought about the misuse we are doing.Stating some examples like using the toothpaste to using the eyecathy lather shoes.Even there could be also some things where animals might be the thing potentially getting used and we might dont even know.
The day and night running industries,which flows out the gases which can even harm us,then what about animals.The gigantic seas,the all day flowing rivers,which is home for too many animals are jst the dumping ground for industries whithout even the thought of the lives living inside.
These are all the concerning points which are affecting the existency of the living creatues.Though it is a very serious concern about the existence of the chain which is running through for the survival of all the ones living on the earth,i dont see the steps taking towards it.Afterall we are the ones who has a pretty brain and also the mighty heart,who will think if we will not.Lets take a step forward all together and think a little bit about our gifted frinds by the all mighty.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208133971292 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.184210526316 0.157235817809 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0502392344498 0.0880659088768 57% => OK
Adverbs: 0.055023923445 0.0497285424764 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.066985645933 0.0444667217837 151% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0980861244019 0.12292977631 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0717703349282 0.0406280797675 177% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81144250438 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0143540669856 0.030933414821 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00239234449761 0.0016655270985 144% => OK
Determiners: 0.131578947368 0.0997080785238 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0239234449761 0.0249443105267 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0478468899522 0.0148568991511 322% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2140.0 2732.02544248 78% => OK
No of words: 367.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8310626703 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.299727520436 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220708446866 0.280924506359 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.136239782016 0.200843997647 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0871934604905 0.132149295362 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81144250438 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 219.290929204 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550408719346 0.48968727796 112% => OK
Word variations: 61.31031286 55.4138127331 111% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6194690265 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 61.1666666667 23.380412469 262% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 127.795952814 59.4972553346 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 356.666666667 141.124799967 253% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.1666666667 23.380412469 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.674092028746 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.21349557522 614% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 83.2375113533 51.4728631049 162% => OK
Elegance: 1.234375 1.64882698954 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260342820333 0.391690518653 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.301445944763 0.123202303941 245% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0993746100524 0.077325440228 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.897694155736 0.547984918172 164% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.194138021259 0.149214159877 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17266803526 0.161403998019 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484082454582 0.0892212321368 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.43605717222 0.385218514788 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0530685737546 0.0692045440612 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189402612317 0.275328986314 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426001152 0.0653680567796 65% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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