watching sport has negative impact on human beings' life
An issue of concern turning into an obsession for numerous people, especially young adults, is the sedentary lifestyle in which they spend most of their time watching TV. Different people have distinct perspectives in regard to whether or not watching sport has negative impact on human beings' life. Although a plethora of people prefer to watch their favorite team's match instead of doing exercise, I, to a great extent, support the view that people should stop watching television a lot since it brings about many problems. My reasons are manifold, among which the most significant ones are substantiated in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, the first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the number of hours we have is limited. In other words, during forty four hours a day, we are able to perform some particular tasks and activities. Therefore, if we spend a large percentage of time on watching television, we have not enough time to do other necessary activities like doing exercise. To clarify, consider a person who spend three hours a day watching football match. He most probably cannot manage his time to do sport, on the ground that he has to do other household chores as well; consequently, no time left for him to go walking and hiking. Hence, it cause many physical problems.
Beyond a shadow of a doubt, watching a game is stressful since during one seeing the match expect some desirable result from his/her favorite team. For this reason, the person is stressed out at least during the play which is really harmful for his healthiness. For instance, it is prevalent throughout the world that some spectaculars die, for stress heightens when they are watching a match. According to the World Health Organization (WHO) it is reported that forty people die every years during watching various kinds of sports. This results indicate that individuals are under pressure when they are watching a game.
Last but not least, watching sport match is usually associated with eating junk food such as chips, popcorn, and so forth. It is crystal clear that consuming such unhealthy food results in obesity. In fact, people who sit in front of television do not have any movement; moreover, they eat such terrible food. For instance, based on a survey, which was conducted in the England, eight out of ten people who see a match consume some fast food or junk food. So it is plausible that this high amount of unhealthy food will have some harmful effects on their body.
To sum up, considering the aforementioned arguments, we may draw the conclusion that spending much time watching sport leads to a lot of problems. Not only does it contribute to doing less exercise, but it also play a pivotal role in increasing stress and tension. Furthermore, since people are accustomed to eating junk food during watching TV, it may cause obesity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: causes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, as to, at least, for instance, in fact, such as, in other words, in regard to, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2389.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94616977226 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64379100668 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538302277433 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4826487898 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.869565217 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178286277356 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539484367488 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102411087872 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100498377299 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766986598413 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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