Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Nowadays the importance of job cannot be neglected. All the effort of a person is to find a task in which he is successful and more happy. Some people think that doing same task all day long is better while others think in a opposite way. In my vantage point, workers are more satisfied whwn they have diversity of chores to do since not only do they become more effective but also, they become less bored.
The first reason which should be stated is that doing diversity things bring chances of learning new things and increase the efficiency of that person. To begin with, doing repetitive thing may master a person in particular task but, it may be ineffective when it comes to do different thing. For example, consider two employers in the same company. One of them attepts to do a repetitive task while, the other ones tries to learn different task. Thus, in a time that company may face monetary problems they may lay off some employees. which one do you think will be fired? The one that do single job since the other one can do many task which even provide him better chnaces of working with others leading to increase his salary. Therefore, he is going to be more satisfied with doing those task because the results was better.
Another point which deserves some point is that worker become more enthsiastic when they perform different tasks. It is obvious that if a person enjoy what he do, he is going to be happy and satisfy with that. when a job is not boring, it will bring satisfaction to that person. Repetitve jobs are boring and make employees less interested in doing the so, after one month they become frustrated and they may even quite their job. However, doing different tasks bring motivation to that person becausethey will never become bored by distictive thing everyday. According to a survey conducted in certain companies, the result demonstrated that 40 percent of them satisfied with their job and the reason for that was doing different tasks.
To sum up, doing novel things make workers more happy with their job since they will be more helpful in their company and, they will never become bored from their job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many tasks
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...ed in doing the so, after one month they become frustrated and they may even quit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in particular, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70899470899 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33786408194 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484126984127 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6429221356 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6842105263 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384722278317 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122457553707 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742526875402 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259911303393 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788012495751 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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