Government should set deterrent against using tobacco.to some extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the past half-century, the question of whether the government should establish
rules and regulations against smoking has generated a great deal of debate and discussion
among people from all walks of life. The popular belief seems to be that authorities
should legislate against smoking. I cannot but agree with this view for social and medical
reasons.
First and foremost, it is a well-established fact that establishing a set of guidelines
regarding the use of tobacco reduces the propagation of health problems in society.
Simply put, there is a direct correlation between restricting the use of tobacco and
having a wholesome society. For instance, numerous studies have shown that so
effective are these regulations that can have a far-reaching positive outcomes.
More significantly, not only can legislating against the issue of smoking make individuals
healthier, but also it can reduce the cost of living noticeably. It goes without saying that
individuals who do not smoke can allocate their incomes to priorities other than smoking.
Thus, it only makes sense to establish relevant regulations for restricting tobacco use.
Another compelling argument in support of setting rules against smoking could be the fact
that smokers often harm other people in addition to themselves. That is to say,
passive smoking in public places is a major concern nowadays. Hence, under no
circumstances should we underestimate the colossal role of establishing regulations
as for smoking.
All things considered, the conclusion to be drawn is that the government should
set regulations in terms of smoking due to reasons such as decreasing health problems,
reducing the cost of living imposed by smoking and preventing harms caused by passive
smoking in public places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, regarding, so, thus, well, as for, for instance, in addition, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57971014493 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0442028123 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1265707302 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.12807881773 509% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170049330732 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590853160973 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346080453367 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047573299929 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445379581685 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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