The following appeared in a note from a sedan owner to a friend.
“Of the two top brands of cars introduced in past year, Kia cars are clearly more superior to the competing Alfa cars. Kia cars boast aesthetically pleasing design and a fuel economy of 50 kms per litre. In the past quarter alone, 8000 Kia cars were sold. Alfa cars, on the other hand have received only a few positive reviews regarding their overall performance. I have personally test driven both brands, and I strongly recommend that you buy a Kia car for superior performance at a cost-effective price.”
Essay
As it is being stateded that Alfa car have received less positive reviews instead of Kia cars. But on what bases have they recommended Kia car instead of Alfa car.Let's discuss more on this futher stating that how far is Kia car superior in comparison with Alf cars?
As the author says that the features of the cars are aesthetically better design , fuel economy of 50 kms per liter. But just on based on these feature we can not recommend to buy Kia. What about the safety measures in Kia car, do they have best anti lock- brakes? do the have Airbags in their features do they have child lock safety measures?How much is the milage this cars gives. A proper list of features are not mentioned and how can we be sure on safety measures of Kia , While Alfa may be having all of these saftey features too.
In last quater 8000 Kia cars were sold because there must be any sales or any other discount that time which must be taken place where the public must have got a great opportunity to grab this deal in low cost. But we need to see the efficiency of the car rather then low cost of car. And the low cost of Kia car may be there must be low quality parts used rather than in Alfa high quality parts must be used which is beneficiary for life long. And on bases on the safety of the car.And only 8000 Kia cars were sold maybe author wasn't aware about Alfa car sale which must be more than 10,000 sale in past quater there are no proper statistics mentioned about sale of Kia car and Alfa car.The positive reviews which Alfa got where in less number which Author has mentioned may be there must be not many number of people who must be interested in giveing reviews comments,but People must me using more of Alfa cars that Kia cars based on Safety measures smoothness of the car, And reviews for kia car may be same number of people say 5% or tha staff of the Kia car stores must be giving numeros reviews for more sale of their car.As the Author must be owing a Kia car that's why he must be having the liking towards Kia car and driven it number of times. But Alfa car he must have test drived it only once, So will he get to know more factors on ALfa car just based on one test drive.
Hence based on this statements how can author recommend only Kia car, and not Alfa car , there should be more clear research sould be done on both the cars properly, to recommend to buy the car.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-08-24 | Kshitij Kasabekar | 60 | view |
| 2023-08-30 | CHAITRALI PHATAK | 50 | view |
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... car have received less positive reviews instead of Kia cars. But on what bases h...
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lets
...recommended Kia car instead of Alfa car.Lets discuss more on this futher stating tha...
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...recommended Kia car instead of Alfa car.Lets discuss more on this futher stating tha...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the cars are aesthetically better design , fuel economy of 50 kms per liter. But j...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...el economy of 50 kms per liter. But just on based on these feature we can not rec...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend buying'.
Suggestion: recommend buying
...t on based on these feature we can not recommend to buy Kia. What about the safety measures in ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
...the safety measures in Kia car, do they have best anti lock- brakes? do the have Airbags ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Do
...r, do they have best anti lock- brakes? do the have Airbags in their features do t...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: How
...do they have child lock safety measures?How much is the milage this cars gives. A p...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r list of features are not mentioned and how can we be sure on safety measures of...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...can we be sure on safety measures of Kia , While Alfa may be having all of these s...
^^
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oo. In last quater 8000 Kia cars were sold because there must be any sales or ...
^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...to see the efficiency of the car rather then low cost of car. And the low cost of Ki...
^^^^
Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
.... And on bases on the safety of the car.And only 8000 Kia cars were sold maybe auth...
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Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.... And on bases on the safety of the car.And only 8000 Kia cars were sold maybe auth...
^^^
Line 5, column 531, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ly 8000 Kia cars were sold maybe author wasnt aware about Alfa car sale which must be...
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Line 5, column 690, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...oned about sale of Kia car and Alfa car.The positive reviews which Alfa got where i...
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Line 5, column 752, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich Alfa got where in less number which Author has mentioned may be there must ...
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Line 5, column 764, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t where in less number which Author has mentioned may be there must be not many ...
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Line 5, column 801, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'many numbers'.
Suggestion: many numbers
...has mentioned may be there must be not many number of people who must be interested in giv...
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Line 5, column 873, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...e interested in giveing reviews comments,but People must me using more of Alfa cars ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...eros reviews for more sale of their car.As the Author must be owing a Kia car that...
^^
Line 5, column 1170, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...r.As the Author must be owing a Kia car thats why he must be having the liking toward...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it number of times. But Alfa car he must have test drived it only once, So will h...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...fa car just based on one test drive. Hence based on this statements how can author...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ed on one test drive. Hence based on this statements how can author recommend onl...
^^^^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...recommend only Kia car, and not Alfa car , there should be more clear research sou...
^^
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend buying'.
Suggestion: recommend buying
...d be done on both the cars properly, to recommend to buy the car.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.9520958084 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 16.3942115768 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 456.0 441.139720559 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23903508772 5.12650576532 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03416315396 2.78398813304 73% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 204.123752495 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425438596491 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 705.55239521 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59920159681 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.67365269461 597% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.8473053892 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.773451139 57.8364921388 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.692307692 119.503703932 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0769230769 23.324526521 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 5.70786347227 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.25449101796 533% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384463388361 0.218282227539 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179890004334 0.0743258471296 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108397805531 0.0701772020484 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292937504756 0.128457276422 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654033467331 0.0628817314937 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.3799401198 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 48.3550499002 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 12.5979740519 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 98.500998004 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.1389221557 144% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... car have received less positive reviews instead of Kia cars. But on what bases h...
^^
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lets
...recommended Kia car instead of Alfa car.Lets discuss more on this futher stating tha...
^^^^
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...recommended Kia car instead of Alfa car.Lets discuss more on this futher stating tha...
^^^^
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the cars are aesthetically better design , fuel economy of 50 kms per liter. But j...
^^
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...el economy of 50 kms per liter. But just on based on these feature we can not rec...
^^
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend buying'.
Suggestion: recommend buying
...t on based on these feature we can not recommend to buy Kia. What about the safety measures in ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
...the safety measures in Kia car, do they have best anti lock- brakes? do the have Airbags ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Do
...r, do they have best anti lock- brakes? do the have Airbags in their features do t...
^^
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: How
...do they have child lock safety measures?How much is the milage this cars gives. A p...
^^^
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r list of features are not mentioned and how can we be sure on safety measures of...
^^
Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...can we be sure on safety measures of Kia , While Alfa may be having all of these s...
^^
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oo. In last quater 8000 Kia cars were sold because there must be any sales or ...
^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...to see the efficiency of the car rather then low cost of car. And the low cost of Ki...
^^^^
Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
.... And on bases on the safety of the car.And only 8000 Kia cars were sold maybe auth...
^^^
Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.... And on bases on the safety of the car.And only 8000 Kia cars were sold maybe auth...
^^^
Line 5, column 531, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ly 8000 Kia cars were sold maybe author wasnt aware about Alfa car sale which must be...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 690, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...oned about sale of Kia car and Alfa car.The positive reviews which Alfa got where i...
^^^
Line 5, column 752, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich Alfa got where in less number which Author has mentioned may be there must ...
^^
Line 5, column 764, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t where in less number which Author has mentioned may be there must be not many ...
^^
Line 5, column 801, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'many numbers'.
Suggestion: many numbers
...has mentioned may be there must be not many number of people who must be interested in giv...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 873, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...e interested in giveing reviews comments,but People must me using more of Alfa cars ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...eros reviews for more sale of their car.As the Author must be owing a Kia car that...
^^
Line 5, column 1170, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...r.As the Author must be owing a Kia car thats why he must be having the liking toward...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it number of times. But Alfa car he must have test drived it only once, So will h...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...fa car just based on one test drive. Hence based on this statements how can author...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ed on one test drive. Hence based on this statements how can author recommend onl...
^^^^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...recommend only Kia car, and not Alfa car , there should be more clear research sou...
^^
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend buying'.
Suggestion: recommend buying
...d be done on both the cars properly, to recommend to buy the car.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.9520958084 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 16.3942115768 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 456.0 441.139720559 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23903508772 5.12650576532 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03416315396 2.78398813304 73% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 204.123752495 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425438596491 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 705.55239521 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59920159681 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.67365269461 597% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.8473053892 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.773451139 57.8364921388 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.692307692 119.503703932 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0769230769 23.324526521 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 5.70786347227 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.25449101796 533% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384463388361 0.218282227539 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179890004334 0.0743258471296 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108397805531 0.0701772020484 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292937504756 0.128457276422 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654033467331 0.0628817314937 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.3799401198 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 48.3550499002 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 12.5979740519 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 98.500998004 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.1389221557 144% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.