Claim: Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts.
Reason: Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus have better judgement and perspective than do members of the general public
To begin with politicians and other government should be left with Major policy and decision making, agreeing with these points we can further discuss that, the government experts will properly analyse and do research about the policy and rules which is needed to be published.
The Policies and other government decision which are taken by government experts are publish on based on whether there is need to get the policy in constituent. How much is need of the policy till what extent it is needed all these factors a government expert or politician consider while publishing a decision in public. For instance like the inflation is increasing day by day so what all taxes and finance etc need's to be consider and these experts while publishing the yearly budget also they discuss with the top expert economist of the country and do research and analysis of the country and then publish these policies for the betterment of the country and for the growth of the country.
If the rules and policies are given to the public general members to decide they will not be able to give the decision based on proper judgment and perspective as they will be considering just their side of the decision and not all of the citizens of the country. It will be biased towards them selves and not betterment for the remaining citizen of the country. And if the decisions are given in their hand to decided and there are no unanimous decisions being consider then there can be many fights or even may lead to biggest war like situation in the country were they are fighting with each other. The Government takes the decision by researching all the perspective and area and angles of the policy they will analyse all the pro's and con's of that policy and then publish the decision in public.
So by considering all the points we can say that the major policies should be left with the government experts and politicians to publish in the public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... policy in constituent. How much is need of the policy till what extent it is nee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72189349112 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48570719116 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408284023669 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4049318177 60.3974514979 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.333333333 118.986275619 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5555555556 23.4991977007 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352762805743 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181112273723 0.0831039109588 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919732570903 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261377760905 0.150359130593 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508804885225 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.