The following appeared as part of an article in a business magazine.
"A recent study rating 300 male and female Mentian advertising executives according to the average number of hours they sleep per night showed an association between the amount of sleep the executives need and the success of their firms. Of the advertising firms studied, those whose executives reported needing no more than 6 hours of sleep per night had higher profit margins and faster growth. These results suggest that if a business wants to prosper, it should hire only people who need less than 6 hours of sleep per night."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
While it is true that sucess of any firm depends on the employess who work their and shows the progress of firm's business but the author's argument doesn't make cogent case about how they hire people for their firms.It is easy to understand that sleeping cycle for an individual shows things at work also , but this argument is rife with holes and assumptions and thus not strong enough to lead the conclusion that business should only hire those people who sleeps not more than 6 hours.
At first , the study through which suggest the business's success data is not completely true and rightfully collected .It is based on only 300 male and female mentian adverstising executives .As if we talk about the firms , it is good number of people works.Just a study of 300 doesn't count for general results.It may be possible that , many people in this study has a habit of sleeping less hours due to their life style , may be some to females are 'Mothers' in the study , in which case they need to wakeup early to get their children to schools .It is also applicable for Male executives in the survery also.It is a agood possibilty that some of them have late working hours in office and late to bed and wakeup early.This study is based on flaws , it is not clearly given that 300 employess they took have same lifestyle and office working hours .So ,it may be possible that 'amount of sleep ' factor doesn't count for same scale.
Additionally , depending on the argument in whcih study shows that those executive who sleeps less than 6 hours are more productive is not completly true as per true facts.An employee works may be depends on many factors , like thier energy , enthusiam ,motivation etc- these are not only comes with how much they sleep at night , it is completly depends on the office environment they are working.For example if a person schedule is 9 hours working in office but due to heavy load , he need to work over time and extended their work upto 12-13 hours .Nonetheless if a person is tired after working 12-13 hours ,will need more time to take rest and sleep.In this scenerio , that hardworking employee may need more than 6 hours at night , doesn't implies that he is not productive at all.So this assumption is totally rife with flaws.
At the end , it is possible that sleeping hours for employee does count in the progress it is making for the firm but it is not totally dependent for his work which refelects the business of the firm.So we may be consider other facts if we want to study the success of any firm and.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 18 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 465 350
No. of Characters: 2031 1500
No. of Different Words: 199 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.644 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.368 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.268 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 77.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.092 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.541 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.541 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.368 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nonetheless, so, thus, while, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 28.8173652695 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 451.0 441.139720559 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59423503326 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38577587826 2.78398813304 86% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450110864745 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 4.96107784431 262% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 112.0 22.8473053892 490% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 261.205259327 57.8364921388 452% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 518.0 119.503703932 433% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 112.75 23.324526521 483% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 5.70786347227 350% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 50.0 5.25449101796 952% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207239678816 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125829126004 0.0743258471296 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410103152756 0.0701772020484 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125829126004 0.128457276422 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410103152756 0.0628817314937 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 56.6 14.3799401198 394% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -25.28 48.3550499002 -52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 44.6 12.197005988 366% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.53 12.5979740519 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.78 8.32208582834 142% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 12.3882235529 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 46.8 11.1389221557 420% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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