Paleo diets, in which one eats how early hominids (human ancestors) did, are becoming increasingly popular. Proponents claim our bodies evolved to eat these types of food, especially bone broth, a soup made by cooking animal bones for several hours. They believe it has many health-promoting nutrients, such as cartilage, which can heal our joints, and chondroitin, which promotes nerve regeneration. Skeptics point out that ingested cartilage can’t replenish cartilage in your knees or elbows and ingested chondroitin doesn’t make our brains any healthier. Yet, there is strong anecdotal evidence that people who consume bone broth have fewer metabolic and inflammatory diseases than those who don’t. Therefore, ancient humans knew something about our physiology that we don’t, and that by emulating the way they ate, we can cure many chronic illnesses.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted
The given argument has a number of unwarranted assumptions. The assumptions being both generations having similar lifestyle and the food that was available several generations before is the same what we have today.
The argument assumes that the lifestyle, what early hominids has, is what we have today. Diet plan is most importantly influenced by one's lifestyle. Diet of a construction worker and a scientist is definitely not the same, with former requiring the larger amount of carbohydrates in his diet. Even if, we assume that the lifestyle of our hominids is similar to present generation's humans, the argument does not comment anything on why the present generation has more metabolic and inflammatory diseases.
The argument takes another unwarranted assumption that the resources, in terms of food, which were available to our hominids are similar to the resources we have today. Situation can be that today we have much better resources, and the diet one is having today suits one's immune system best and proves better at protecting us from the diseases. Even if we assume the available resources are similar, the arguments foes not say anything about the resources equally beneficial for the humans today.
The argument fails to take into account the differences in the lifestyle of the two different generations and the resources being equally helpful.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fore is the same what we have today. The argument assumes that the lifestyle, wh...
^^^
Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... and the diet one is having today suits ones immune system best and proves better at...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.9520958084 8% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 55.5748502994 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 2260.96107784 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 219.0 441.139720559 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27853881279 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86693998618 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 204.123752495 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538812785388 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 705.55239521 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8289661189 57.8364921388 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6 119.503703932 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 5.70786347227 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0837949383434 0.218282227539 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387901108998 0.0743258471296 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240563650912 0.0701772020484 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472780841916 0.128457276422 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333530607402 0.0628817314937 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.3550499002 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 98.500998004 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fore is the same what we have today. The argument assumes that the lifestyle, wh...
^^^
Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... and the diet one is having today suits ones immune system best and proves better at...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.9520958084 8% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 55.5748502994 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 2260.96107784 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 219.0 441.139720559 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27853881279 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86693998618 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 204.123752495 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538812785388 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 705.55239521 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8289661189 57.8364921388 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6 119.503703932 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 5.70786347227 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0837949383434 0.218282227539 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387901108998 0.0743258471296 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240563650912 0.0701772020484 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472780841916 0.128457276422 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333530607402 0.0628817314937 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.3550499002 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 98.500998004 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.