The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.
During my university life, I have participated in various youth conferences and festivals fostered by other universities, governments and the civil society. In all of these, directly or indirectly, the main idea was the construction of ties between all the participants to build new ideas. I agree with the statement that cooperation prepares young people for leadership.
A team is needed for the development of new leader ideas and projects. One person can start and build a project all by his own, but there will be a moment where more workforce and more ideas will be needed to contribute to the innovation of it. Current technology leaders didn't build their empires all by their own, they relied important aspects on other people. For example, Bill Gates had Steve Wozniak supporting the IT developing; the founders of Paypal had each other to help with both leagal and tech issues. One can argue, that these are extreme cases, but if we look at more common organization, any company or project with potential have many people helping it, since the more the complexity of the idea, the more people is needed to especialize on a especific task. Also, it's a common misconception that sharing ideas is a certain way to have an idea stolen. Ideas need to be criticized in order to be purified to the state of the art and people is needed to make them into reality.
Many political issues of the current world are caused by an exacerbated sense of competition. Inmoral politicians take advantage of their state of power and get involved in acts of brivery and corruption since their sense of competition is oriented to have more extrinsic resources like money, power or fame, instead of intrinsic ones like work for the people, advancement of the society and real happiness. It is true that competition is a quintessential value for the development of new ideas, otherwise inventions will not exist, but it is also true that this competition must be oriented to intrinsic goals. And these goals are achieved by the cooperation of people towards it.
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Suggestion: the; IT
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90517241379 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83257403969 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7958027508 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.928571429 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140146892129 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567063765441 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599433292166 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985264667694 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01351845755 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.