Claim
Unequivocally, men and women are naturally bestowed upon marginally different physiques, manifestly owning to the duties reserved for them, those are for men to provide for his family and women to give birth, breast feed and raise the children. Furthermore, it clearly separates them physically, as men is strong suitably adapted for the harshly surrounded conditions and duly adopted to be the protector of the family. However, Prompt still do pose pointedly as to what kind of tasks are referred to. Tasks requiring tremendously demanding physical labor are definitely becoming of a man, while on other of moderately physical laborious nature, can be performed equally effectively by both, like the most prudently forthcoming examples can be of tram driving, cleaning as such involves strength employing both of them.
Conversely, men are naturally not as amiable, affectionate and touchingly near to kids as women although they do equally love their children, but exhibiting it, in somewhat different course of revealing manners, and these mode of conveying feelings, part of which of course does not directly linked to inherent physiques but of course, consequence of them. Due to which for some men somewhat it would be relatively demanding -in some cases, and sometimes even very difficult-to solely raise a kid.
In the modern world, there are outgrowing notion of mostly slipping men out of the duties and jobs of what their inherent physique reservedly reserved for them, and slipping in the women in there, which is sheerly contradictory to the exactness of duties assigned on the behalf of the nature. Not only would it entirely demolish the natural structure, but would have long lasting egregiously social impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this mode' or 'these modes'?
Suggestion: this mode; these modes
...ferent course of revealing manners, and these mode of conveying feelings, part of which of...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'link'
Suggestion: link
...rt of which of course does not directly linked to inherent physiques but of course, co...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'notions'?
Suggestion: notions
... the modern world, there are outgrowing notion of mostly slipping men out of the dutie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, so, still, while, as to, kind of, of course, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 275.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31272727273 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87370294134 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614545454545 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2086524429 60.3974514979 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.625 118.986275619 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.375 23.4991977007 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 5.21951772744 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 14.1392134831 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 48.8420337079 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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