Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Success in today’s environment is completely arbitary.However, as per the assertion and reasoning behind it suggests that the surest path to success in any field can be greatly achieved by revitalizing leadership.According to me , the revitalization cannot be the only way to success there are evidences through which i can prove my position for the claim . I will have to respectfully disagree with the author.
Firstly , Considering field of business where the only thing which matters is competition and strategic planning which is gained through experience not by theoretical knowledge.For example, If a person who is well known for his way of handling the business and his actual talent can be seen by other competitors in business as well. His talent also points us out for the future of the company.Now, just because of the claim made that success is only achieved through change in leadership.In this case the deserving one or the one who was more appropriate have to replaced just because of the claims.This actions can lead to debasing the business value.
In addition , Politics is a field where it comes to work for the welfare of the public and fellow citizens.In order to get elected for the same work you need we need to have a good public image and the most important factors which plays a vital role is a "Trust". To achieve this significant thing one needs to be vice enough that it cannot be build up instantly one needs to show some actions or do work for them in order to build trust.For instance, I am the one who is local politician and to gain that position i have did alot of work for the people in my neighbourhood and i know each and every diminutive details of my area under my supervision in those 5 years i was able to impart more knowledge about the same.However,just because of the authors assertion i need to give up my position even though i am doing every possible thing for my people.
Lastly, there is a saying "Knowledge is power" and the only place to imbibe knowledge in todays world is through educational institutes.Nowadays institutes are transforming day by day with the help of thriving technology. The ones who have been teaching from so far consider for the beginning a child is mentored by a particular teacher. In this case teacher knows the learning capabilities , grasping power of that child and many more characteristic of that particular child .Both of them are comfortable in sharing each other point of view.But due to this claim , teacher who had the capacity to improve childs performance will greatly affect the childrens future.
In nutshell , my premises for my stand towards the claims are prevasive in the above passage i strongly disagree with authors point of view.Change is not the surest path to success there are many others way through which we can achieve an insightful investigation of authors claim can make this claim attackable.
- In an attempt to improve highway safety Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways But this effort has failed the number of accidents has not decreased and based on reports by the highway patrol man 60
- Claim In any field business politics education government those in power should step down after five years Reason The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership 50
- According to a recent report cheating among college and university students is on the rise However Groveton College has successfully reduced student cheating by adopting an honor code which calls for students to agree not to cheat in their academic endeav 53
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2437.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92323232323 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1250510702 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 23.0359550562 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.567038203 60.3974514979 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.7 118.986275619 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.5 23.4991977007 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.21951772744 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206197939371 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795908054027 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700524068443 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12397212375 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657893802279 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 14.1392134831 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 48.8420337079 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.1743820225 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 11.2143820225 193% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.