Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
For any country, their major cities are its most valuable asset. It is these cities that are instrumental in bringing about the
globalization of a country by making a mark on the international platform.They are the node where all the trade activities, financial
transactions, cultural exchange converge to and /or diverge from.The affluency of these cities commensurates the development of a country
thus, making them an important element in a nations progress. The governments must , therefore, meticulously cater to the all the financial
requirements of these cities .
The very character of a country is potrayed by its people and that is why, the culture of a country is its primary defining element.
The major citites are cosmopolitan in nature and amass people from nearly all the different culture and traditions found in the country.
People from various backgrounds, cultures, religions come to these cities to make a living and end up contributing to its vast pool of
cultural and ethnical varieties and thus, become prevalent.As these cities are highly globalised, they, in a way, represent the entire country to
the world at large as they are the ones which predominantly get engraved on teh face of the globe. So effectively, the country's culture is
represented by theculture within these cities. People from all around the globe look up to these cities' culture and tradition as a projection
of the entire country's. So it is of utmost importance that the governments pay strict attention towards the well-being of these cities. People
all over the world know about indian festival of ganesh chaturthi which is primarily focussed in the sprawling city of mumbai. One can find
lord ganesha's idols not only in india but also in countries such a thailand, vietnam , indonesia , japan ,etc. Mumbai , since ancient times
has been a major trading centre of india which which helped it entrench its relations with a lot of countries. As the city grew richer in its
population and consequently its culture, it was noticed by many other countries which propagated the festival of ganesh chaturthi to other
countries as well.
For international relations, healthy cultural exchange is a must and a country's major cities act as an ambassador for the country,
it becomes the government's responsibility to channelize a decent amount of financial support towards these cities which would eventually
stand in a good stead in the long run as it would create much more opportunities in these cities which would ameliorate the lives of its
residents and thereby , presesrve and even generate new cultures,ethnicities and traditions within these major cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2264.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28971962617 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06200305813 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516355140187 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.797448198 60.3974514979 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.714285714 118.986275619 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.97078651685 402% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246261897065 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906875678434 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603929948848 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08444923827 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485181731679 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 14.1392134831 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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