Claim: When planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students.
Reason: Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
students are keen to learn the things that they find fascinating and interesting. it is true that students want to study the subject of there interest, it does not mean that when planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestion. so i disagree with the assertion. The reasons to bloster this position are given below.
To begin with, es are plan to give comprehensive knowledge to all the students. And all the student might not have same interest. so courses offer should encompass detail knowledege about the subjects. For instance, when i was in middle school, i came to realize that i was interested in science and maths, but i had to devote equal time to other subjects as well. Looking at the hindsight, i came to know the values of all other subjects that i studied in school despite my disinterest in those subjects. As these subjects helped me to understand different aspect of society and also life. so the cources provided should be well planed so that students have better understanding in all subjects,
Furthur, cirruculum that provided in universites are desiged by the experts that has experience in that particular fields. they have better understaning what to include in the course and what will be more pragmatic as well as significant. For example, when was doing my bachelors , there were so many subjects that we have to study, like fluid, chemistry so on. I didn't think those things will be used anywhere, but as i went to 6th 7th semestars i learned knowledge about those things were important to understant the other subjects which also include subject of my interest.
Finally, students interest might change as they age, mostly people know what they want to take when the go for undergraduate. Even there also they join particular disciplines like engineering, medicine and so on. within those major also there are subdivision and if one wants to learn more about the subject, one can do master ofr phd. so there are options available to students in there univesities to take particular course of their interest.
In nutshell, as explained above, as knowledge should be comprehensive and are provided by the experineced educators. they are well planned and need not suggestion from students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, in particular, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78594038788 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1195740581 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.85 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330042865352 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100039524368 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100277033747 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201884561997 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108407906424 0.0667264976115 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.