college student should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The statement claims that 'student ...
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Line 1, column 417, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e a drawback for student who are having a interest in the field which doesnt have...
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Line 1, column 447, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...re having a interest in the field which doesnt have much jobs. Firstly lets ta...
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Line 1, column 459, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...interest in the field which doesnt have much jobs. Firstly lets take good si...
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Suggestion:
...e field which doesnt have much jobs. Firstly lets take good side of it, lets ...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...it, lets take an example: Nowdays python , bigdata are the major field of getting ...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this language' or 'those languages'?
Suggestion: this language; those languages
...dent is pursuing their further study in those language there are vast chances that they get hi...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...t chances that they get high salary jobs . if they do it they can achieve their g...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...hances that they get high salary jobs . if they do it they can achieve their goal...
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Suggestion: There
...ey can achieve their goals and dreams. there are much available jobs on that fields....
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Suggestion: It
...are much available jobs on that fields. it is considerable as a good idea. ...
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.... it is considerable as a good idea. Secondly now take a scenario what if a s...
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Line 6, column 92, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...is passionate about something which has less chances of getting job? I think its bas...
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Line 6, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lling to do.if you are very enthusiastic in that field which is not high in the ...
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Line 6, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you are very enthusiastic in that field which is not high in the market but with...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssionate about it they can get paid. In sum ,I think it is better to get in ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ut it they can get paid. In sum ,I think it is better to get in the fiel...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it they can get paid. In sum ,I think it is better to get in the field w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, i think, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 264.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49242424242 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46399823364 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.526885697 60.3974514979 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.25 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337111976956 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13648145268 0.0831039109588 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100499643429 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1898035764 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08247599901 0.0667264976115 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 100.480337079 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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