college student should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
The statement claims that "student should base their choice of a field of study on availability of job ion that field " In my view it is far most the considerable opinion because if the student choose the filed which have many opportunities will be a major advantage to themselves, they can get jobs easily without getting into any trauma or tension.but it can be a drawback for student who are having a interest in the field which doesn't have much jobs.
Firstly let's take good side of it, let's take an example: Nowdays python , bigdata are the major field of getting paid, if a student is pursuing their further study in those language there are vast chances that they get high salary jobs . if they do it they can achieve
their goals and dreams. there are much available jobs on that fields. it is considerable as a good idea.
Secondly now take a scenario what if a student is passionate about something which has less chances of getting job? I think it's based on own mindset what do you willing to do.if you are very enthusiastic in that field which is not high in the market but with hardwork you can get paid.lets take an example : the field of art and drawing has lack of opportunities but if someone is very passionate about it they can get paid.
In sum ,I think it is better to get in the field which have variety of jobs in that field because why to risk your future by selecting the option which are lacking of jobs.
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- The following is part of a memorandum from the president of Humana University Last year the number of students who enrolled in online degree programs offered by nearby Omni University increased by 50 percent During the same year Omni showed a significant 33
- college student should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 264.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49242424242 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46399823364 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.526885697 60.3974514979 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.25 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337111976956 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13648145268 0.0831039109588 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100499643429 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1898035764 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08247599901 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 100.480337079 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.