Education should be equally devoted to enriching the personal lives of students and to training students to be productive workers
Education is the golden key by which one gathers a whole new perspective of life. But if education is only limited to theoretical knowledge then it is of no use. Rather a balance between practical and life oriented knowledge considering one’s needs should be imparted to the students in order to make them truly educated.
From elementary school to undergrad or even post-graduation , we learn so many things in life. Knowledge is a never ending sea . But how much of these learnings actually influenced our life is a major question . Our traditional educational system only focuses on passing the exams. Neither this thing helps in our work life nor in personal life. An educated person needs to be morally rich as well as possess a good character . A good character build up is one of the most important aspect of education. For example, kids are taught more moral stories in elementary school because it is their best time for personal development.
There is another hard truth is only being a good person doesn’t always earn you everything. You have to be skilled,diligent in your work. There is no doubt great books can shape our minds but in order to cope with the practical world we need skilled workers. If education doesn’t provide this opportunity of developing practical skills then we won’t have graduates who will change the world. Not only productive training helps in professional life ,but also it helps in preparing someone for his own life. If you don’t know how to deal with real life challenges then survival would be hard for you. Thus we need both moralizing and useful education equally.
If we think of productive training as fully field level training then may be academics won’t need that much time spent in those things .They might have to concentrate more on theoretical studies. Thus in some cases we should realize the priorities too. Not everyone needs everything . As an example, a doctor or engineer may need more of practical training but if we think of a philosopher, he might need less professional focus.
Undoubtedly education should be theoretical and practical both but it should focus in the needs of the person . So education shouldn’t be devoted equally without considering the needs of everyone individually.
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| 2020-08-11 | Nafisa Sadaf Prova | 50 | view |
| 2016-09-05 | ahilanav | 50 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, well, for example, no doubt, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01851851852 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86621047537 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2947374198 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0416666667 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243535559044 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672476739221 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071530317952 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156769153762 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837889818479 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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