Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws
Law, being one of the cornerstones of our society, has its great importance on balancing individual rights with our obligations and guarantees us a harmonious, and fair society. However, when some bad laws that have damaged people’s life and diminished the justice and that are enacted by governments, the laws should be disobeyed and resisted under any circumstance.
The major reason people are willing to obey laws is that this practice fits their own moral concept and they don’t want to bear the consequence for breaking laws. Since we are young, our education tells us that we should obey the law because we shall be punished for breaking it. After all, Law serves a variety of functions. Laws against crimes, for example, help to maintain a peaceful, orderly, relatively stable society. It is judicious to say that without laws, people’s happiness and well-being cannot be guaranteed. Thus we are responsible to obey the just laws in order to reach a harmony in society. That accounts for why When we gradually grow up, our moral concept guide us to obey laws, and by doing so, every individual’s right and interests will be protected. In addition, laws, being one of the most significant foundation of our society, having its authority which enacted by the governments shall not be easily disobeyed. Without laws, our civilization will be a complete chaos and disorder for the reason that we cannot judge everything from our various moral standard. For instance, the movie The Purge takes place in the future, in which one certain day in a year, all crime is legal, thus people break the law unscrupulously and bear no consequences. Sky high rate of violence and murder leads to instability of society and pandemic panic in every individual. The movie shows how devastating the consequences are without law. 这个时候《The Purge》可以上场了。
Nevertheless, some bad laws are doomed to be resisted and thrown away for the sake of civilization and mankind progress. After all, Laws are the product of human creativity and are therefore fallible. They may fail in their objective as a result of design defects or become outmoded. What is worse, They may also incur excessive costs or produce unacceptable side effects. Fortunately, laws, like every other human-made product, may be improved by amendments and they may be repealed when they found to be less than useful.For instance, on December 1, 1955. A women named Rosa Parks was arrested because she violated the laws of segregation, refused to give her seat to a white man on a bus. Shortly after her arrest, local civil rights activists began boycotting the Montgomery City bus system. The boycott lasted for 381 days, was led by Martin Luther King, Jr., and ultimately pushed the Supreme Court to rule the segregation law on the buses unconstitutional and the unjust law was changed permanently.
To sum up, every individual has a responsibility to obey just laws which uplifts humanity and disobey any unjust law that degrades humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, after all, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2547.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13508064516 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10804649437 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6298081859 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.739130435 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5652173913 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345608424198 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104835446701 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118333263184 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280779047006 0.150359130593 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156993616735 0.0667264976115 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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