Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them

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Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.

Many leaders are made by the demand on current circumstances. These demand might be making the most profit from the corporation, representing one nation, or establishing a new path. However, there are some cases that the leaders exist, without appropriate demand. Even with this situation, these cases have potential demands and therefore I agree with the issue above.
There is a possibility that the leaders can exist without proper demand. For example, many dictators across the world are not welcomed by their public. Even though, the public does not have a demand for this kind of leader, it still exists. Moreover, there might be no possible demand for current situation, like firefighters or soldiers. Without the breakout of a war or fire, leaders of these association is not needed. However, these cases have demand that are hidden beyond the surface. The alies of the dictator might demand for the dictator. The possibility of war and arson breakout might be the demand for a leader.
Leaders come from specific group, and this group is made because of particular goal. Therefore, the demand for this specific achievement oblige individual in this group for leader. Without the existence of the leader, they will have problem congregating their ideas since every individual tend to have different ideas. In the case of many corporation, that the main goal is to make as much profit as possible, existence of leader is critical. For example, Tim Cook, the CEO of Apple, made Apple the most successful IT corporation in the word. Therefore, for the effective management, the leaders are needed.
Leaders are likely to be nominated by group members. There is no reason for the existence of these leaders if they don't have specific demand. Moreover, without the demand, there is no reason for the members in the group to unite. Since the demand and the group cannot be segregated, and the group cannot exist without a leader, it can be seen that the demand that creates the leader.
In conclusion, there might be a possibility that the demands might not exist in certain situation. However, these demands are easily not seen in everyday lives. Moreover, it is almost mandatory to have leaders for each group for efficiency for their goal. Therefore, I agree with the assertion above.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this association' or 'these associations'?
Suggestion: this association; these associations
...e breakout of a war or fire, leaders of these association is not needed. However, these cases hav...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun corporation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many corporations'.
Suggestion: many corporations
...to have different ideas. In the case of many corporation, that the main goal is to make as much ...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... the existence of these leaders if they dont have specific demand. Moreover, without...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02099737533 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62833340407 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412073490814 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3755228471 60.3974514979 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5769230769 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6538461538 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274990877185 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103764746861 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689044448234 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190923166431 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550078529778 0.0667264976115 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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