The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is not uncommon that youths are one of the most easily influenced age-group. Recently, youths are known to widely dominate both the virtual and non-virtual world. The state of culture and youth embodiment of their various contemporary culture differ greatly and are interpreted based on the development and/or ignorance of said culture. The statement encourages the analysis of youths as an effective method in understanding contemporary culture. In my opinion, I disagree with the prompts for two reasons.
To begin, the world as it stands is currently advancing on the 'technology-front'. The progression of technology through the 2000s has led to the introduction of social medias which serves as a bridge to link and connect people from all over the world. This development has encouraged exposure to modernized slangs and trends, peer pressure amongst youths, and ignorance of various contemporary cultures and origins. Increasing exposure to these social media has led to adaptation and incorporation of cultures. A typical example is fashion. The fashion world is very dynamic, for every season there is introduction of trends. If we were to analyze youths based on trends in fashion, the results will be misleading and will not depict the contemporary culture unless that is the stated theme.
Furthermore, youths are not as staunch in their belief and culture as older age-group. Youths tends to fight for freedom of their rights. They resist the hold of culture and follow the trends of iconoclasts that serves as their role-model. For instance, Kim kardashian is a well-known socialite. She influences millions of people from all over the world. She goes against contemporary culture structures and establishes the 'new-thing' every now and then. She is well known and unashamed of various liposuction that she has undergone. This amongst others have influenced and inspire her followers to emulate her way of life. Analyzing youths that are ardent follower of such iconoclast will not lead to understanding contemporary cultures but will only 'demoralize' and yield false interpretation of said culture.
Of course, an argument in favor of the statement is that there are various popular people who stands by contemporary cultures. but how many youths do so? Youths are easily enticed by what is 'trending' and 'freedom' than a typical 'rustic' belief. For instance, LBGTQ over the years is now well accepted and encouraged than when it was frowned upon centuries ago. Infact various movies and series tends to incorporate themes supporting LGBTQ in order to please youths and eschew unorthodox stance on the view. Therefore, analyzing the youths solely on the basis of their trends is not the best way to understand contemporary culture because 'trend' is not static, it is ever changing and will keep changing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 434, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...tructures and establishes the new-thing every now and then. She is well known and unashamed of var...
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Line 4, column 454, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ishes the new-thing every now and then. She is well known and unashamed of various ...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...le who stands by contemporary cultures. but how many youths do so? Youths are easi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2368.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25055432373 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92877547334 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507760532151 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4561388786 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7037037037 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7037037037 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199593500545 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509671628222 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432528045868 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128905584346 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333340212274 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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