'A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college'.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Students are the prospects of a nation and their future, in a large part, is governed by the schools they attend and the curriculum they follow. So, it is crucial to have a good standard for curriculum that is applied fairly in all the school in a country. In the given prompt, the author suggests that it is essential to have a same national curriculum same throughout the nation until the students enter college. In my opinion I mostly agree with the claim that the author made for three reasons.
To begin, school education is a foundation to all other further studies. Moreover, it is a fundamental knowledge that is being taught at the school level. And, everyone on the nation, whether the rural or urban part, should have a common basic ground to begin with. For say, the students from the country side and the urban city, in the higher studies, is likely to come under the same college. And it would make much sense, that they have similar basic understanding and knowledge level. For example, a prospective science student from the every part of the nation should have the same foundational knowledge so that later they can have a common start in the college level. This illustrates that fact that in order to avoid any discrepancy among students it is essential to have a common cirriculum accross the nation.
Second, the material that is used for teaching materials like books is likely to be more qualitative and accessible. A considerable thoughts will be given by a governing bodies for ensuring a good basis materials.
However, according to the geographical region, and their culture it is wise to have a dedicated subject, particularly for that given region. It helps preserve the culture and ethnicity of that particular region.
Thus, I beleive that most of the general curriculum should be made same in the nation with some local subject specific to the region.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'fundamental knowledge'.
Suggestion: fundamental knowledge
... other further studies. Moreover, it is a fundamental knowledge that is being taught at the school leve...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thought'?
Suggestion: thought
...litative and accessible. A considerable thoughts will be given by a governing bodies for...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'body'?
Suggestion: body
...e thoughts will be given by a governing bodies for ensuring a good basis materials. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86687306502 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64646671994 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504643962848 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9882180459 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.25 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211674088061 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070176411807 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602646066618 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111512539396 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835479037652 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.