A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
When it comes to education, the first thought that comes to mind is curriculum. Nowadays, governments and organizations responsible for education put a lot of efforts on making sure the curriculum presented to schools is the most contemporary and helps our generations to be prepared for facing the future. The prompt recommends that a nation should require its students to study based on one curriculum until they enter college. In my opinion, I partly agree with this suggestion and argue that if all efforts are put in only one superior method, then every school can use it for two reasons:
Firstly, the education in each country is separated in different branches, like private, public, religious, or professional. It is very helpful to come with a shared curriculum for the common subjects leaving out the special ones that do not apply for each school. For example, an international school has much to offer to the other schools since it has an international orientation. Furthermore, students that profit from this curriculum have chances to go to any college which before might seem harder than before.
Secondly, let’s assume that we do not have to use the same standards because our schools might have totally different orientations. This is not helpful because wee are going toward a globalized economy. We need to be prepared for the upcoming challenges that show up in our students’ path of education. For example, in a professional school, where students are learning culinary, they will need to learn technology, history and more. Shortly told sharing the same curriculum helps students succeed in their education and avoids the barriers that halt them when it comes to choose the right college.
In conclusion, a nation should require and offer the new generation one curriculum in order for the students to get the best from set standards for every school and be prepared for a globalized world economy and life. In order to reach this the organizations responsible from the government should offer the time, money and efforts that make possible the education to use the same ‘engine’ toward success.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
When it comes to education, the first th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1776504298 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86437519925 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535816618911 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0368701814 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.071428571 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23761728089 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877439860739 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139235423161 0.0758088955206 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144163172017 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747855614916 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
When it comes to education, the first th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1776504298 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86437519925 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535816618911 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0368701814 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.071428571 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23761728089 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877439860739 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139235423161 0.0758088955206 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144163172017 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747855614916 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.