People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
taking decision in life is more difficuilt than anything else . Above prompt says that people who take decision based on emotions instead of logic and latter justify them with suitable logic are poor decision makers . Thus i mostly agree with that and i have two reasons .
in our day today life we see people and thier life which probabaly based on their every decisions .people who take deciosions based on emotions we easily identify them with help thier worrking style like my brother who always take decisions with help of his emotions and always talk to himself while situation ahead . that emotion based decision making perspective give people a differnt habit that reflects to other while they taking decisions . similary that habit attract other to do same like they did .like my brother always prefer his decision stratergy to his friend which makes them also a poor decision maker . people who make decision based on emotions are usally poor thinker becuse of that dont consider any logic while taking decision they only take decision according thier mood while taking decision .
in other way , people who are bad expirences in past and they usally avoid mistake in future are always take decision based on emotion with thier expirence . i would like take example from history about variuos kings and thier decision while going to war . usally before war king always make a plan or stratergy for win which help them in war but kings who take decisions based on emotions like never go on war ,never take a decision which makes thier opponent king angry and decisions who create war these king remain small in history they never ever win any war and any piece of land in thier life.
in the conclusion , people who take decision based on thier emotions are never be enough successfull like people who take decision based on logic and stratergy .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88253968254 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19720886795 2.79657885939 79% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457142857143 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6660643748 60.3974514979 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.818181818 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522306579451 0.243740707755 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.275415412818 0.0831039109588 331% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154218990766 0.0758088955206 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.41104016883 0.150359130593 273% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095300489702 0.0667264976115 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.