A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Any act that defies the code of law formulated by the government is a crime. Everyday a surfeit of crimes is committed, ranging from trivial ones like shoplifting to heinous ones like murder. Although I agree with the law that all criminals need to be punished, I do not completely agree with all of them being stripped off their civil rights and right to be benefitted from their labour, because the nature of every crime and criminal is different and this practice can be abused by many prisons and their officials.
To begin with, the severity of every crime, the intentions behind it and the contrition that every criminal has committing it are different. Therefore, it would be an incorrect practice to employ equally draconian punishments for all of them. For example, a homeless woman may have stolen food from a man because her children were hungry and, in the process, may have hurt him a little. She has committed the crime out of desperation and is extremely remorseful about the consequences of her actions. As opposed to this, there are cases of terrorists who kill several people and cause excessive damage to public and private property but show no regret. Though both these cases qualify as crimes, the circumstances are diametrically opposite. The woman in the former scenario should be punished but not with a harsh punishment which involves depriving her of all her rights. Whereas those in the latter case, do not deserve any rights as citizens and must be stripped off most of these rights, as also made to carry out unpaid labor. Thus the above examples show that not all criminals deserve to have their civil rights and the right to be paid for labor, been taken away.
Further, if the criminals in prison do not have any rights the prison officials may abuse this. For instance, in a women’s prison with all female prisoners, there may be male prison guards who may exploit the fact that the women are without any rights. This may cause a surge in the rape cases in the prisons, with little or no action taken against the perpetrators. Also, the women can be subjected to extremely harsh forms of labor and this can be detrimental to their health. Therefore, by making an attempt to protect the code and taking away rights of criminals, we may be paving way for more crime.
Thus, the issue is complex with no right answers. However, I feel that depending on the crime, the severity of the measures taking with respect to depriving the criminals off their rights must be taken. Also, it should be ensured that no person takes undue advantage of this practice. Only then can it be ensured that, a just judicial system is being fostered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...ormulated by the government is a crime. Everyday a surfeit of crimes is committed, rangi...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...n that every criminal has committing it are different. Therefore, it would be an in...
^^^
Line 3, column 1035, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...as also made to carry out unpaid labor. Thus the above examples show that not all cr...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76077586207 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5168935385 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508620689655 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6385399738 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.19047619 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0952380952 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184565226248 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587613695863 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040207366841 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122928067165 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337526322114 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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