Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
I strongly position myself with the view that a corporation should promote the wellbeing of the societies and environments in which they operate. Because even if you are operating within the norms, the sole purpose should not be to be lucrative. Yes, definitely any corporation should earn money and make profit but it would be an additional surplus if the products, from which they are gaining the profit, also augment the growth of environment as after all, we are living in a complex mutual ecosystem. During the epoch of CFC refrigerants, many air-conditioning and refrigeration industries were using these CFC based fluids for their products. During that time, the law did not know the consequences of using them. Until the discovery of an ozone hole over Artic subcontinent which was mainly caused due to the release of these chlorofluorocarbon gases in the atmosphere, these refrigerants were then substituted by a more viable and eco-friendly refrigerant. This was one of those times where humanity realised the importance of the environment.
Even today, many firms and industries are putting immense amount of their money for the research of renewable sources of energy. The question is why is that? Even though the automobiles conform with the standards of carbon emission, there are new inventions going on that is exploring the flied of hybrid vehicles, bio-fuels, renewable sources of energy, etc. This is because the humanity has faced two problems; one is the increase in temperature of the ambience that has led to the global effect called global warming and the other is lack of abundance of the non-renewable energy sources like crude oil.
Another example that illustrates that the corporations are trying to reduce the risks of exposure to potentially harmful environments is the involvement of robots. Robots are now being implemented in automobiles, manufacturing, electronics, food and beverages and many other sectors. For example, in forging industries the humans are exposed to high temperatures, heavy machineries that increase the chances of a fatal injury. By the involvement of robot, these risks are diminished and thus promote the safety standards and well being of their employees. If we look on the other side, robots also increase the overall productivity of the plant and thus we can say more profit can be made.
To summarise, now the corporations are not just looking for lucrative product but also it should be sustainable with the environment and promote the wellbeing of the society. And for this lots and lots of research is being made to achieve this goal. If any new established corporation has a single-minded goal of making only money, I would question him/her that “Should that be your only goal?”. After all these products are going to be used in the society where WE live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 606, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this CFC' or ''?
Suggestion: this CFC;
...and refrigeration industries were using these CFC based fluids for their products. During...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e the wellbeing of the society. And for this lots and lots of research is being made...
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Line 7, column 397, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... that “Should that be your only goal?”. After all these products are going to be used...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, thus, well, after all, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2377.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15618221258 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0099988181 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524945770065 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 756.9 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3718477438 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.85 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.05 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156180984331 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452751761709 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634183053993 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866004027177 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598551474153 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 100.480337079 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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