Technology has made Human Lives more complicated.
In this technological era where we are totally dependent on science and its innovations from waking up in the morning till night, from making our coffees in coffee Blender to making chapatis in chapati maker by using dough machine. These Scienctific inventions have made human lives simpler and easier.
Everyone is wholly rely on mobile phones which has replaced clock, letters, diaries and many things , it has shortened the distances. Now you are just one call away from your loved ones . Computer and laptops have simplified the research for scientists , they can just type any thing on the Google they will get lots of pages related to that information. In past , if they wanted to cite a research paper inorder to work on their thesis they had to first write a letter to the author of the paper and ask them to sent that paper. this whole process was so time taking and often took 2-3 months. Recently they are just one click away from the information they want. Currently science and technology plays a significant role in transportation sector also, Bullet trains, Metro, Nano are the live examples of this which saves ample of time and anyone can travel through these at cheaper rates. Ages ago people use bullock carts or Horse carts which is very time taking and uncomfortable means of transports. Microwave, fridge, oven , etc are other important examples of devices which we use in our daily lives.
Technology has also contributed a major role in defense also, rockets, machine guns, spacecrafts, aircrafts , missiles are its examples. Due to scienctific innovations we are able to get rid of many deadly diseases like small pox, dengue etc and research is going on cancer oflate. In this technological world, the young generations have many opportunities for better career and employment.
The conclusion is that the techology made our lives simpler and saves our time which we will utilize in another innovations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ve made human lives simpler and easier. Everyone is wholly rely on mobile phones...
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... clock, letters, diaries and many things , it has shortened the distances. Now you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02173913043 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65258445074 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627329192547 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7899822146 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119059616294 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408661253259 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689550183343 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889898225525 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470294034619 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.