Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Ideas are our gateways to legacies. Once an idea has been incepted, it is rarely that a man wont act on it. Especially when it comes to eccentric or novel ideas, men tend to see it through to the end. But often they are in this journey of making their ideas a reality, they are accompanied and infact harried by gratuitous criticism. This has been the case for many legends, but crossing this stream of doubt and critics often makes their journey's comparable to a legend. I do agree with the prompt and there are multiple reasons as to why i take this position.
It seems almost in a custom in this world that any idea when first exposed to people other than its initial owner, it is raided by criticism by people. This is the case especially when involving any novel concept, a risk that the person wants to take etc. Everyone tends to take a safe position and tries to deter the person from chasing after this idea that they had. But almost every time, this kind of criticism stems out of fear rather than actual fallacy in the idea. For example, when a student tries to drop out of college to pursue his entrepreneurial dreams, he might be criticized by his parents and almost everyone who knows him for giving up a 'safe route' to a good life.
A similar case has been observed in many great figures in recent history. For example, Elon musk was discouraged to invest in tesla and spaceX after Paypal was sold by him. His peers adviced him to live a peaceful life with the fortune he had attained instead of sabotaging it. But despite this barrage of discouragement he met with, he decided to go ahead and start two new companies effectively rendering him in debt at the that moment. But today we see him as the owner of multiple successful firms and a great figure in the field of Science and Technology. All because he did not pay attention to the criticism, but decided that he would rather see his idea implemented and than just refrain from it.
It is also to be noted that these criticisms are not a one time flood, but rather they are a continuous stream, that one must prevail through. And indeed when their idea is finally implemented and good, their stories become one of a legend's. This is observed in the cases of Bill Gates, Mark Zuckerberg, Alva Edison etc. The perseverance is what adds merit to these stories and places the people who infact are brave enough to take their ideas and turn into reality in hall of fame that is ideal for legends.
However some skeptics might argue that criticism indeed exists to evaluate ideas effectively and understand the fallacies present in it. But examining the people who offer these criticisms, you tend to understand that they worried about the person rather than the idea.Hence their critique is rather emotional than cerebral. Of course any person capable of sound logic and reasoning will not turn a deaf ear to criticism that is constructive. This can indeed enhance their ideas and change their course of action. But it is better that people ignore criticisms that are directed toward them for having an idea, and unfortunately, when the someone does have an idea, it seems the world is flush with gratuitous criticism for him/her. But getting through this is in fact part of the journey for any 'legend' capable of a legacy.
In conclusion, it can be definitely said that people who tend to see their ideas through regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a legacy behind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 81.0 33.0505617978 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2873.0 2235.4752809 129% => OK
No of words: 622.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61897106109 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99398916966 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45761886993 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 302.0 215.323595506 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485530546624 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 909.0 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 6.24550561798 304% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.77640449438 676% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7267212283 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.607142857 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305010361119 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792943664213 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12468166447 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219613709711 0.150359130593 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.215208616575 0.0667264976115 323% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.