To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
In today's world with things fickling at a rapid pace, the developments in the major cities constantly drive out the developments in less prominent cities. Assisuous efforts are made to reconcile the developments in less important cities to compare and contrast it with the most important ones. But when it comes to exploring the charachteristics of the society, major cities are always given preference and priority. The prompt suggests that to understand the important characterisitcs of a society, the nations major cities need to be studied. I strongly agree with the statement and provide three pivotal reasons in the favor of the mentioned statement.
To begin, in the contemporary society, the developed cities are majorly responsible for the reverence of a nation and its economy in the global world. Most of the Multinational companies, and its headquarters are located in the most prominent cities, which allows them to leverage advanced facilites at a large scale and also at an affordable price. The amenities offered by the metropolitan cities when juxtaposed with the rest is predominantly colossal. For instance, Google has its offices in major cities in India such as Bangalore and Hyderabad. It is easy for the employees to to work more effectively due to metros and effective public transport. The governemnt is constantly making efforts to ameliorate the lives of people in these cities. No doubt, even the rural areas are being developed but the when it comes to generalizing the public of the nation, only the major cities are explored.
Secondly, the standard and the cost of living in the important cities play a vital role in determining the characteristics of a society. It is easy to conduct a survey in urban areas with ease as compared to rural areas. Due to availability of smart phones in every household in the smart cities, it becomes very simple to conduct any sort of survey by just sending a notification. Conducting a survey in rural areas takes an exacting effort by visiting every household and then collecting the information. Also, the coverage of news is pivotal cities is much larger as compared to less developed ones.
Some critics might argue that rural areas and underdeveloped cities too play a major role, since a lot of activites are performed in these areas. But, if we ruminate thoroughly, consider the woking of today's society and ponder upon the aforementioned reasons, it is clearly visible that the major cities play a significant role in determining the charactersitics of the society due to the ease and sophisticated techology usage in these areas.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...Hyderabad. It is easy for the employees to to work more effectively due to metros and...
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Line 5, column 569, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...f news is pivotal cities is much larger as compared to less developed ones. So...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to play'?
Suggestion: to play
...t rural areas and underdeveloped cities too play a major role, since a lot of activites ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, no doubt, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10981308411 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04258630549 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488317757009 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2251048312 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.105263158 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5263157895 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267894791264 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789205351884 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672645481836 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151307654192 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561029614104 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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