We learn our most valuable lessons in life from struggling with our limitations rather than from enjoying our successes.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Some people may argue that we learn valuable lesson through challenging ourselves instead of admiring our past success. Since it is obvious that only if we break our limitation again and again can we have continuous success. If we just enjoy what we already succeeded, we will not get improvement. From my point of view, I think it is agreeable.
It is true that if we always do what we are good at but reluctant to do what we dislike, which will lead to some problems. The first is that we would be less likely to accept new things. As it is widely accepted that if we do not learn something new as the technology developing faster and faster, we may be disputed by the world. In other word, not only can we learn valuable lessons, but also we fall out of the world.
Another problems is that challenge ourselves can make us become motivated. As there are new things for us to explore, meanwhile, there are many other people who better than us can be our role models which we can learn precious lessons from them. When we get the motivation to compete with others, we can learn from the rivals. No matter whether we get the first prize in the end, we also experience something different.
However, enjoying our past success has some benefit. For example, we will get sense of achievement when we recall our past glories when we are depressed in failure. Moreover, we will feel confident and conclude the past experience in order to find an improvement. Although it is quite insignificant, because we have done a lot in the past so that we achieve higher goals.
In conclusion, I think it is sensible to conclude that the most valuable lessons we learn is when we struggling with our limitation which would impress us most, but enjoy our past success will also make trivial contribution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
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Line 8, column 216, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...we will feel confident and conclude the past experience in order to find an improvement. Althou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6375 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59217572707 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496875 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9931192692 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2941176471 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280641077673 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105969749853 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845619347436 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20031140837 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908467066231 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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