Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Policies that focus on protecting environment should not be imposed upon multinational organizations as they generate profit and boost the economy; even though they cause damage to the environment.
Nowadays, Damage to the environment is increasing by various factors and one of the important and valid reason is because of the expansion of human life in the forest restricted lands and encroachment, inteference in the wildlife areas. Thus it becomes very important to restrict human life expansions to protect the environment. Therefore policies should be imposed on the multinational companies as these companies doesn't care more about the harm they are doing to the surrounding nature and solely focus on their monetory profits.
Human life is closely related and dependent on its surrounding environment and so the surrounding living life as wel. By not imposing the stringent policies upon multinational comapanies will give them a free hand and authority to operate in whichever way they want. As most of these multinational companies are concerned about their business and monetory gains as compared to the effect or harm they are doing to the surrounding environment's health. In addition to this, if policies are not imposed then these multinational organizations will try to encroach the reserved forest lands due to their low land cost which will ultimately drastically lowers the wildlife's overall well-being.
Enviromental deteoriation will also cause rare animals and living species to disappear from this planet. To maintain the balance of the living life on the planet, it is very crucial to safeguard and protect these diminishing living species.
Although, These multinational companies will create the huge number of employment for the people of the country and will boost the economy but it is very important to consider at what cost? Because these multinational companies can also expand their business even after imposing some enviromental-friendly policies by building their organizations on non-reserved lands and still they will contribute to the country's economy and in the favour of citizens by generating the uge employments and still contribute to the well-being of the surrounding environment and also contribute positively to the most discussed topic today 'Global Warming'.
Hence to protect our surrounding environment and to keep it as intact as possible legal authorities should impose required policies that must focus on the protection of the environment and well being of the wildlife as loose policies on the multinational companies will not do any good to the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44680851064 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16335113494 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494680851064 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.8456513823 60.3974514979 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.666666667 118.986275619 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0875763288441 0.243740707755 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332139361246 0.0831039109588 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267574197402 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530964977303 0.150359130593 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234707921913 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 14.1392134831 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.