The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.
The chart graphs compare the number famale and male take part in the olympics and the second picture illustrate the change the people participants the Olympics between 1924 and 2012.
Overall, it is can clear see that the first picture Which the rate women take part in olympic was change throughout 88 years and the it was shorter than the rate of man in showstime . The second graph that is the change of people parctice in Olympics from 1924 to 2021.
The line chart show it was simple tend through 88years started 1924. These figure accounted for roundly 3000 persons .After 60 years, it experienced a slowly incease to over 300 human. From 1984 to 2012 the number human parctice Olympics reach peak of up 10000 persons in 2012.
The second picture tell that the rate of men higher than womwen who have entered olympic . We can see that in 1924 , the figure of woman was not 200 persons while the men recorded almostly 300 person. Meanwhile , the number female see a rose to over 1500 persons in 1984 beside the munber male participants Who entered in the Olympic still increase by over 5000 persons. In 2012, both gener was incease especially the figure the woman take part in olympic gone up sharply just 5000 persons and sm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64220183486 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18025463353 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52752293578 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2039799025 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168353569563 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756857674053 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684069686685 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110862568585 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554552033196 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.