The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ee that the first picture Which the rate women take part in olympic was change t...
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...n olympic was change throughout 88 years and the it was shorter than the rate of ...
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...in Olympics from 1924 to 2021. The line chart show it was simple tend through 8...
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...021. The line chart show it was simple tend through 88years started 1924. These...
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...started 1924. These figure accounted for roundly 3000 persons .After 60 years, it...
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...her than womwen who have entered olympic . We can see that in 1924 , the figure of...
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...ntered olympic . We can see that in 1924 , the figure of woman was not 200 person...
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... We can see that in 1924 , the figure of woman was not 200 persons while the men ...
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...s not 200 persons while the men recorded almostly 300 person. Meanwhile , the num...
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...recorded almostly 300 person. Meanwhile , the number female see a rose to over 15...
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... participants Who entered in the Olympic still increase by over 5000 persons. In ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64220183486 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18025463353 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52752293578 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2039799025 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168353569563 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756857674053 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684069686685 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110862568585 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554552033196 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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