The chart below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009
The bar chart and pie chart illustrate reasons why Americans travelled and what problems they have faced in the year 2009,
It is clear that majority of US residents travelled mainly because of their work and minority of people had travelled to visit friends and relatives. However, the main concern for travelling was the cost of trips in the same year.
In terms of reasons for travel, commute to and from work was the highest figure in the bar chart, at 19%.On the contrary, only 6% of trips were made by US citizens to visit friends or relatives, which was the lowest figure. Furthermore, travelling for personal reasons, shopping, social and recreation accounted for 19%, 16%, and 10% respectively in 2009.
On the other hand, according to the pie chart, the main issue for travelling was the cost of it, which was considerably higher than other problems, at 36%.Besides, 19% of American people's concern was for safety which was slightly higher compared to the concern for aggressive driving. Also in the same year, 14% people of the USA described traffic congestion as their problems, while the proportion of people who thought that access to public transport and space for pedestrians were some major travel issues was, at 8% and 6% respectively.
- The chart below gives information about science qualification held by people in two countries
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islipas it is now and plans for its development 59
- Happiness is considered very important in life Why is it difficult to define What factors are important in achieving happiness 61
- The chart below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009 82
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...highest figure in the bar chart, at 19%.On the contrary, only 6% of trips were mad...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...ably higher than other problems, at 36%.Besides, 19% of American peoples concern was fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, so, while, as for, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98578199052 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65731009031 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3893535339 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.333333333 112.824112599 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1666666667 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.23603664747 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426688667416 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231172731504 0.103423049105 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475548699645 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271020643117 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403610788591 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.2329268293 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.