The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates the unemployment condition of urban and rural places of Australia in 2012.
Unemployment of both the rural and urban places ended up with approximately 5% in the last quarter of the year though at the beginning the scene was different.
In urban areas of Australia, the rate of unemployed people was a bit more of 2% while it was below 7% for the rural areas in the first quarter.
After the end of the first quarter, the rate of unemployment in urban areas gradually increased before the end of the second quarter again it got declined before the end. However, the rate in urban areas was gradually declining and thus it has ended the second quarter of the year. The lowest rate of unemployment was found after the half of second-quarter for urban areas and for rural, it was immediately after the ending of the second quarter.
After the starting of third-quarter, the rate of unemployment increased ridiculously and having a slight declination at the the beginning of fourth-qarter, it somehow ended up by a bit less than 5%. On the other hand, the rate gradually inclined and declined through the third quarter and ended by 5%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...usly and having a slight declination at the the beginning of fourth-qarter, it somehow ...
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Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...usly and having a slight declination at the the beginning of fourth-qarter, it somehow ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, third, thus, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88400762828 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3320185832 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.072736545621 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506825900639 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478335460408 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697583555247 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498479948126 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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