The charts below show the household expenditure in the two countries between 1980 and 2008

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The charts below show the household expenditure in the two countries between 1980 and 2008.

The charts compare the five categories of household expenditure in the UK and Newzealand in the year 1980 and 2008.
Overall, the emerging fact from the chart is that the percentage of spending on food and drink declined in both countries, whereas the expenses on utility bills surged.
Looking in more details at the food and drinks around one-third of people of New Zealand spend their income on it, while the equivalent figure for the United Kingdom was 29%. By contrast, both regions experienced a slight increment in expenditures on utility bills for average home from 27% to 31% in New Zealand and from 26 to 28% in the United Kingdom.
Marching forward, in both years investment on leisure activities remained higher in Uk as against New Zealand. Interestingly, a similar amount of money spent on other categories in both years for the UK and New Zealand, which was 11% and 9% respectively. Nextly, in terms of transport there was negligible decrease was noticed in both regions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...he UK and New Zealand, which was 11% and 9% respectively. Nextly, in terms of tra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, third, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92814371257 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76208274302 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616766467066 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1779370999 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894130048916 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557235767997 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107414154521 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944627604228 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128578258642 0.0819641961636 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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