The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The picture represents the production process of electricity for the Geothermal power plant through the generator turbine.

In general, there are 5 stages of production. The process starts by delivering the cold water to the ground and finishes by producing electricity through a turbine.

In the first stage of production, the cold water is filled in a small tank and pumped into the ground through a pipe of 4.5 kilometers in length. After that, cold water is injected into the geothermal zone by separating the pipe into three small lines.

After passing through the geothermal zone (contained hot rocks), water is delivered through 3 lines to the hot water zone and pumped up the condenser machine. The condenser then uses the amount of hot water from the ground to generate clouds. Clouds are steamed in order to produce energy using a turbine. The turbine then is activated and generated electricity for the Geothermal plant.

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Average: 8.1 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11038961039 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68828816101 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506493506494 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0998575496 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4444444444 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160185490851 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806402382442 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714547369836 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101532791928 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517241818149 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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