The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented diagram depicts how sugar is generated from sugar cane.
It is clear that there are seven main stages in the process of making sugar, from the initial growing of sugar cane to the eventual drying and cooling.
In the first stage of this process, this plant is planted in the fields between 12 and 18 months. After that, harvesting is carried out by either agricultural machines or workers, depending on the scale of the plantations and the available equipment. The harvested sugar cane is then crushed by a grinder machine in order to obtain juice.
The four and five stages involve syrup production. The liquid generated from the previous phase is purified by a limestone filter before being heated to become syrup through evaporation. Following this, sugar crystals are separated from syrup by a centrifugal machine. Finally, these substances will pass through the drying and chilling process to make the end product: sugar.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09032258065 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56475754595 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651612903226 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1330005771 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281136802447 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11577951191 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113636458426 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203751802723 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103994152432 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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