The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Write a report for a
university lecturer describing the information below.
The given process demonstrates the different stages of how to extract olive oil the olive. It is clear from the picture that there are seven different steps from picking to the final sale.
To start with, olives are picked from the tree. After that fresh olives are cleaned in cold water and removed all trash and dust. Then all clean olives are kept on the belt that carry the olive to a smashing machine to smash the olive. After completed smashing, the stones of olive are removed through the the chamber and from another chamber olive paste come out. This paste are kept in a bag that has more holes to flow the air in the paste easily. In the fifth stage, this paste are pressed through thr pressing device to get the maximum amount of liquid from the paste. In last stage, water and oil are separated from the liquid olive juice and oil is storaged for sale.
Overall, it can be seen that the process of extracting oil from the fresh olive is very complex involving many steps and devices. It also time-consuming too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...the stones of olive are removed through the the chamber and from another chamber olive ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...the stones of olive are removed through the the chamber and from another chamber olive ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52688172043 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07972111403 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52688172043 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5210941823 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5454545455 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116114151297 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486471517508 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456200917467 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744964670008 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245600067142 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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