The diagram below shows the water cycle which is the continuous movement of water on above and below the surface of the Earth

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The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The provided diagram illustrate the water cycle, which is the cyclical process of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
Overall, there are four main stages in the water cycle. The natural process begin with the evaporation of water then condenses as clouds, falls as rain snow. And finally, water returns back into the ocean again.
At the beginning, we could see that eighty percent of total water vapour in the air was contributed by the ocean. Because of sun's heat, ocean water evaporates and condenses into clouds. In the next step, a wind gathers the vapour and forms cloud.
Subsequently after, the clouds precipitate water and fall as rain or snow. Ending with the stage of the cycle, rain water takes various paths, such as falling in the lakes, rivers or turning into snow and running back to the ocean via surface runoff. However, rain water is also absorbed by the ground then it reaches the impervious layer it turns into underground water of the earth and it passes back into the ocean where the natural cycle of water continues without ending.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returns'.
Suggestion: returns
... falls as rain snow. And finally, water returns back into the ocean again. At the beginning...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
...nd gathers the vapour and forms cloud. Subsequently after, the clouds precipitate water and...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, so, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78494623656 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23441274178 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575268817204 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.313902456 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341265976707 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138197418503 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136768553842 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242700244091 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163134767186 0.0819641961636 199% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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