The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line chart illustrates the fluctuation in the number of shops being closed and opening in a certain country over the course of 7 years, commencing from 2011. Overall, it is evident that even though there were remarkable fluctuations in both phenomena, the decline was exhibited significantly in the number of new shops while merely slightly in closures.
To begin with, the number of new shops, while commencing at the highest point of approximately 8.500 shops in 2011, plummeted to only a half of the initial data, registering 4.000 shops in 2012. Surprisingly, the number of 4.000 shops continually took place from 2015 to 2017 while there was a recovery at the intervals (a gradual rise from 3.000 shops in 2012 to 6.000 ones in 2014), subsequently followed by a decline of 1000 shops, reaching the lowest point during the surveyed timeframe, constituting only 3.000 shops in 2018, which exhibited a drop of 5.500 shops in comparison to the initial data.
Moving to the data revealing the number of shop closures. Although there was a slight fluctuation in the number of closed shops from 2011 to 2014 (approximately over 6.000 shops), it sharply dipped and reached the lowest point of approximately 500 shops being closed in 2015. However, the trajectory then skyrocketed tenfold and stayed stably at 5.000 shops until 2018, which exhibited a slight drop of 1.000 shops in comparison to the initial data.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... rise from 3.000 shops in 2012 to 6.000 ones in 2014, subsequently followed by a dec...
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Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., constituting only 3.000 shops in 2018, which exhibited a drop of 5.500 shops in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02966101695 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79147898555 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.5073752072 43.030603864 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.571428571 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7142857143 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285191599532 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167533318563 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316756278465 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222808869782 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146092105196 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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