The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
A glance at the line graph provided illustrates the percentage of people who are 65 years old and over during the period from 1940 to 2014 in three nations: America, Sweden and Japan.
Overall, it is evident that there is a considerable fluctuation in the number of the population in these three countries, with lows in 1940 and highs in 2040.
Increasing from approximately 7 percent in 1940 to 20 percent during the 2000s, the proportion of Sweden's old population, then, decreases gradually in the period of the 2020s. This is followed by a period of exponential growth, with this population in Sweden, rises quickly to 25 percent in 2040.
From 1940 to 2020, the old of Japan makes up the lowest line of the graph, under 10 percent. However, the number of old population in Japan sees a rapid climb, over 25 percent in 20140.
In America, there is a constantly development in the percentage of population aged 65 years and over between 1940 and 1980, before dropping slightly to under 15 percent in 2020. The latter years of the graph, however, brings a sustained increase in this figure, about 23 percent in 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ed illustrates the percentage of people who are 65 years old and over during the period...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('constantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('development') instead of another adjective.
...percent in 20140. In America, there is a constantly development in the percentage of population aged 65...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75384615385 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70034940637 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5914949134 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.875 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188089823485 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897160818921 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423349517695 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114543487719 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332562278123 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.